Current state of my animatic for Mock Crit:
Still got a few notes to work on for final faculty crit:
- pose and bike jacket changes age and confidence, consider making more vulnerable
- cut instead of zoom at 530
- need logo at end
- fools slowly looks up ... needs to replace
- add another shot exploring sequence
- add tint of blue to water 1319
- cut to door closing
- hold on electric chair
- hold on some frames a little longer 1583 1660
- add mask to tv noise
- use VO cue and hud element to clue in "calm down" is game element
- 1256 mess up the ladder sequence ... having to change ladders
- use the opening sequence from non-linear montage
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